lunes, 21 de marzo de 2011

ME

Hello! My name's Lola. I live in Cañada Rosal, is a small town. I'm ten yers old. My birthday is in March. My favourite colour is pink. My favourite sport is volleyball. My favourite animal is dog. I got a long fair hair, brown eyes, small mouth. I like pizza and chips but I don't like lentil or honey. I can play volleyball and play paddle but I can play football or ride a horse. I have a dog. Is small. It's got black and white spot. It's got four legs and two eyes. It likes orange but It doesn't like dog food. It can run but It can't fly.

By: Lola Cifuentes 5ºA.

1 comentario:

  1. Tu composición está muy bien pero debes prestar atención a los fallitos, porque sueles tener los mismos,ok?

    No olvides el verbo: I´ve got long fair hair....
    Ni los pronombres: It´s small.

    Very good!
    Your teacher,
    Lidia.

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