This story is about a girl named Orlindiania. She´s eleven years old. She´s tall and thin. She´s
got long, dark, straight hair and blue eyes. She´s got small glasses. She´s very nervous. She likes
playing, climbing and dancing.
One day decided to go to a toy factory.I travel to a toy factory. Was with toys all day, until is closed.But closed and she was there. At night it was very dark. And realized that when not looking
the toys are moved. The girl was scared and run, but I could not leave. Morning came and girl not return to be more ambitious.
THE END
BY EMMA CANALES HANS 6ºB.
Emma está muy bien tu cuento, es muy interesante. Poco a poco irás aprendiendo a redactar en tiempo pasado. Por ejemplo, te pongo el pasado de algunos verbos que has utilizado en tu cuento.
ResponderEliminaris = was
travel = travelled
run = ran
Debes intentar no olvidar los pronombres. Por ejemplo, One day she decided.....
Very good!!!
Your teacher,
Lidia.