miércoles, 23 de febrero de 2011

Tuck

Hello! My name´s Tuck. I live in David´s house. I´m 8 months old. I have two small eyes and a mouth. I´m orange. There aren´t plants in my aquarium. I´m short and thin. My best friend is Sunny. I have wings.
By David Comiche 5B.

2 comentarios:

  1. Congratulations!!! Your composition is very good. I like it very much!!!

    Pay attention: I´m 8 months old.

    Very good!! Excellent!!!!

    Your teacher,
    Lidia.

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  2. He corregido los errores

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