lunes, 14 de febrero de 2011

PATRICIO

His name is Patricio. It's tall and fat.

It's pink. It's got head and a swimming trunk. It eats hamburger. It lives in the
sea.It can swim but I can fly or walk.It likes eating and sleeping.

By: Lola 5ºA

1 comentario:

  1. Hi, your description is OK but there are some mistakes. Can you try to correct them, please?

    Remember: Don´t forget to write the article (A) It´s got a head and a swimming trunk...
    We don´t use ING with the verb CAN. It can swim but it can´t fly or walk.

    Very good..

    Your teacher,
    Lidia.

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