Hello! His name is Shin Shan . He´s five years old . He´s from Japón. He lives
in Kasukabe. He´s a student.
He´s short and thin. He´s got black and shor hair. He´s got brown eyes. He´s
handsome. He´s wearing a red coat, a yellow trousers, a white socks and a
blue trainers.
He´s nervous, rude, brave, crazy, talkative and cheerful.
He likes ice cream and and biskit. He doesn´t like pepper and peas. He likes chocolate but He
doesn´t like pepper. He can run and walk. He can´t fly or swim. He can walK but
He can´t swim. He´s good eating. His favourite animal is a dog.
BY EMMA CANALES HANS 6ºB
Congratulations!! Your composition is very good. I like it very much!!!! There are some mistakes. Can you correct them,please?
ResponderEliminarRemember: He can´t swim.
he doesn´t like...... or...........
white socks, blue trainers.....
Excellent...
Your teacher,
Lidia.
Maestra ya he corregido los errores. ¿Vale?
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